|Reviews for Nightmare|
| The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I can see a few spelling/grammatical mistakes in here, and that does somewhat take away the focus on your actual poem (it's a generic thing with short pieces of work), but other than that, I like the imagery you've put forward. The sad thing is that commas and/or fullstops not being around where they're due means more work for the reader to put the changes in pauses in themselves, which does dim the overall impact of your poem...and it's not something every reader particularly wants to do, as a regular reader that is.
Also, you should distinguish between your title and your actual poem, unless in all cases the title is a part of the poem. It does read a little oddly though as I can't tell which way you've intended it.
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Loved it! Amazing poem and very well written as well as described. Simply...Amazing. Awesome job! Keep it up .