Reviews for Shadows
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
This is very interesting, almost poetry in nature.

I think it would do better written in present tense. "Now, they watched" isn't grammatically correct, or at least I think. If it's correct, it sounds funny anyway. You kinda jump around from present to past, and I think it would be better to stick to present the entire time.