Reviews for Welcome to the Jungle
NatalieWilde chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I would continue to read this story if the relationship between the two characters remains positive.

I like that he seems protective of her and that she seems to trust him and he draws strength from that.

You're doing well setting up emotional issues with few words. This is a good teaser hinting at issues that will be developed in the following chapters.

The concept that everyone is on their own in a harsh world but that these two have found each other to rely on is a good one.

Good luck
AlaskafoundxX chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Reminds me of the way my ex and I would go at it with loud rock music in the background. ] Really steamy. Loved it! ]