|Reviews for Helvete|
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 19 . 4/10/2013
A brilliant conclusion for the hiatus. I love the foresadowing, and I am dying to see what happens in the end. Also, apologies for my own absence. College prep has been difficult at best.
Riyin Nos Reche
| SamchaLowang chapter 4 . 11/7/2012
Subtlety n the suggestive way of writing that u have done here is really good Shamwoo :)
(in our own little code language-very "Crowley" like). Perfecto Madame!
| poetblackcat13 chapter 16 . 11/6/2012
Oh, I see the Bromance. Oh, I see it. :D
Keep writing, this gets better and better.
Loved the death scene, so pretty.
| poetblackcat13 chapter 12 . 11/6/2012
Write, more god darn you. WRITE. MORE. NOW.
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 11 . 11/5/2012
Very well done protraying the "Magnificent Bastard" aspect of Mephistopheles. Might I reccommend an explanation of his hold on the mortal realm? According to LIBRUM and MORTE DIABLE Devils have a less than hard grasp on reality, requiring the buy-in of mortals to power their fell magic. Of course, this is disputed heavily by NECRONOM (Arabian) and multiple authors, both modern and ancient, but it is a viewpoint I prefer as it explans the reasoning behind their trickery, rather than the penchant of Demons to simply aquire souls via brute force. This is not to be mistaken with subservience, as a Devil is not unaccustomed to violence, but still, their unnecessary use of trickery has always baffled me. A very good portrayal. Keep up the excellent writing. Cheers, Riyin Nos Reche
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 10 . 11/5/2012
greatness as always. Spelling errors are minor and the voice of it flows quite smoothly. Excellent again. - Riyin Nos Reche
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 8 . 11/5/2012
"and YOUR lie was dicey." Also, it took me a minute to figure out the speakign order. Revise a bit? Great chapter regardless. I like the ending lines. - Riyin Nos Reche
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 7 . 11/5/2012
Awesome! Finally! Also, I appreciate the dedication. Love the sarcasm that keeps coming through in Faust's voice. Alas, I too have exams, and so will be on hiatus for some of the next few weeks. :( Ah well. Great work again. Cheers, Riyin Nos Reche
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Please update. I am hooked on this story. I have read and reread it countless times, and am suffering from literary withdrawal. This has great promise, is one of the many items in your profile that could be published successfully, and is the focal point for my interest in your work. Don't abandon greatness...please?
| Riyin Nos Reche chapter 6 . 7/10/2012
I love this. It's modern, but with an archaic hinting to it. You've done a beautiful job melding the past and present and portraying Faust in a way the reader can sympathize with. Some of your scenes here move too fast, and a few minor spelling errors present themselves, but besides that, this is absolutely brilliant. I expect to be seeing great things, and something tells me you won't disappoint. Cheers,
Riyin Nos Reche