Well done story, I quite enjoyed it. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. Thanks for sharing.

This was a wonderful story that I found hard to break away from... You're writing has a way of catching the attention and holding it tight till the very last word. Bravo, I can't wait to read more of your work!

It was an amazing story! All the characthers were so colourful I LOVED them! It was impossible for me to pick a favorit:)

It's kinda funny that despite it being in the future, it was like medieval which I understand the logic. Of course the human race would exploided earth enough that they have to go back to the medieval ways, which was awesome. I love the magical feeling of the medieval times!

I'm a little surprised there was so little magic involved though, but i didn't mind just surprised. I like ruling system.

I'm surprised you don't have more reviews than this, you defintely deserve way more :) Thanks for the story I really enjoyed it :D

Simply fantastic. I loved the story. Kept me reading for hours :)

Once again got though this pretty quick, really enjoyed the flow of your stories and hope so see more of your work. If you have more stories I would love to read them. keep up the great work you have a real talent here.

Interesting, i must say. What happened to her?

The only thing i notice was that when the text said " He gave her a gently smile"

maybe something like "he smiled at her gently would work.

OH HOW I LOVE YOUR STORY! i hope to see more of Lilith and Iscar!

AJ

Yay a new story!-happy dance time-