Reviews for Strike Pilots 1 : Raiden
Charming Dice chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
This is very well-written. Good description and dialogue. Solid character development. The problem is, not a lot actually happens here. It feels incomplete, like this only half of a chapter.

It might be hard to get reviews for this. Because there's not much to review.
ladyunelovestreize chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Please review, people!