This is amazing! O_O I can't wait for you to continue. Please continue...like right now.

I love it already, since it has a simple, yet lucid narrative and I have a feeling, that the story is gonna be (at the want of a better word), HOT. ;)

Excellent, I look forward to see how this plays out. :D I do hope Favria and Alydien come into a better relationship.

"kissed anyone!"-"its disgusting" aha! typical ten year old- please continue your story

AJ