|Reviews for Enemies|
| Elizabeth Drake chapter 4 . 7/31/2012
Aw... That's a shame :(
| July D chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
| Elizabeth Drake chapter 3 . 7/15/2012
I am enjoying this and it was well written, but there is some awkward wording, for example:
"And they do come, as soon as my one left foot has been set inside the building."
Just sounded odd to me. Maybe:
"And they do come, as soon as my left foot stepped inside the building."
Or something like that?
| Ana3498 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
You must continue this! I think a great story can come from it.
| Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Aw c'mon! I wanna know how they prank each other, and why they hate each other! :D
You did an excellent job describing their personalities, that shines out a lot. You can also easily understand, feel, and enjoy what your characters are portraying. Well done, next chapter please! :D Keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!