|Reviews for The Two Best Words|
| Remi chapter 17 . 10/14/2013
I just love this story. I can really relate to the "gay who does not understands why he is not straight and refuses to come out" thing. And that was brilliantly done. Good idea of narration too, really amusing especially the ending. Well done
| DandyChance chapter 17 . 9/11/2013
Hahaha. Funny and adorable. Interesting style too.
| polvere di stelle chapter 2 . 8/11/2013
i love this freaking story thank you so much for having so many chapters to look forward to
| Demon.beneath.the.yaoi2 chapter 17 . 12/14/2012
If it makes you feel better, the epilouge whatever, the end, it killed me, well make you happy.
| Demon.beneath.the.yaoi2 chapter 11 . 12/14/2012
I'm such an idiot, when I read the feedback feedback I finally understood the "both ways" comment but I thought of it that way at first but then I confused myself about it... These two and their ramblings remind me of my characters Nich and Chase, and Lyle and Ray, now those two are. Also question, my friend (the one who acts like Kolya with the "fuck you" thing) threatened to kill me if I didn't write Lyle and Ray's story and I was wondering if I could borrow your narrative writting style, it's ok if you say no, I just thought it would be interesting to see how Ray describes his relationship with an Angel.
| Demon.beneath.the.yaoi2 chapter 10 . 12/14/2012
Its me again, before I continue reading, is Kolya a bottom in the relationship? I just wasn't sure also, nomatter how many times I go over and sound out his name, Kolya comes out as Koyla, I don't know why but my mind thinks its better this way. Stupid brain -_- still lovin the story though, I can sense the balance between the humor and seriousness in the story, I can also sense the approaching drama, but you do a good job at slowly bringing it around to entertain the reader, it's not very obvious but I observe stuff to closely and I sometimes ruin the story for myself...
| Demon.beneath.the.yaoi2 chapter 7 . 12/13/2012
I love this story so far. I found it in my friends favorites. The fuck you and yes please reminded me of that same friend and i arguements everyday at school. She , my two other friends, my mom, and my siblings know I'm bi but my friend likes to torture me by usi.g that knowledge. I woke up at 2 am and now I gotta get ready for school (its like 6am now). Well, I'll finish reading later. Ps, I lauhed at the arguing and other stuff. I shall read your other stories when I get the chance. Viva la yaoi or slash or whatever...
| KatieBobb chapter 10 . 11/9/2012
So Anna wears boy cloths on the weekends?
| KatieBobb chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
The point of view isn't that weird, it's just so the character. Unless it hasn't gotten weird yet, lol. I loved it. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting! :)
| Random chapter 17 . 10/30/2012
Unique and I fucking loved it! Gaaahhhhhh all the feelings .
| thegirlbehindyou chapter 16 . 9/18/2012
And.. Oh my god, please ignore the awful mistakes I've made in the prev. review! I'm posting from my iPad and the AutoCorrect is messingup every word I write xD Sorry!
| thegirlbehindyou chapter 16 . 9/18/2012
Awww what a cute story! I didn't really like Kolya at the start, butby theend he sort of grew on me. The way you told the story was fresh too, confusing but enjoyable nonetheless. You're a really, really good writer. I'm off to look for more stuff written by you now!
| thecrivens chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I love all your stories, but I love this one the most. I like Kolya's running commentary to Kris' story because I can see Kolya's view of what happened and it makes both of them seem so real. are you planning to write some drabbles about these two in the future? if you are, I'm going to be very happy reader :D
| i heart manga89 chapter 17 . 6/24/2012
Screw leaving; I'm just gonna sit and...video tape. Don't mind me
Anyways, I just wanted to say I love this story. I've never read a story that's written in the way yours is, yet it only seems to add to the...playfulness (Not the best word, but in my defense, I stayed up till midnight to read this. My brain isn't working to well at the moment) I also love Kris and Kolya. They're strange and a little dysfunctional, yet at the same time, they seem...well, natural. I've read some stories where, after all the angst, the relationship goes back to sweetness and roses and all that. But these two still are teasing and making fun of each other, which only makes them cuter
...Not the best review, but again, it's late. Brain isn't working. I just thought I should leave a review saying that I really loved this story.
| Andy.T chapter 17 . 6/22/2012
this story is amazing. i wish i could write as well as you...
i just love Kolya. he is amazing. almost as amazing as you yourself. keep writing!