Reviews for Foil
anonym chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
I really like the last line of this poem. It's a good conclusion. Who is this poem about? It makes it seem like it's a close friend.
Cannoli chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Yay! You spelled it right. I get so annoyed when people don't. Very nice poetry, but a little confusing. What did you mean by "every dance contends with you"?
Opaque Prision chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
VERY Stuttle. I like the rhyme scheme. Nice job