|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I know this doesn't have anything do with the poem itself, but the spacing is off. Poems usually consist of no blank spaces under it. I've been example-happy lately, so here I go again:
'If those I loved were lost,
The Crier's voice would tell me-
If those I loved were found
The bells of Ghent would ring-
Did those I loved reposed,
The Daisy would impel me.
Bore his riddle in!'
Emily Dickinson-If Those I Loved Were Lost. Can you see how spacing affects your poem in the slightest way? Or possibly it could be that I'm a perfectionist (if you're good, I apologize for getting on you about this).
| i'mafishxXll chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
try adding little more colors on this poem
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
Awww, this poem was so short, yet caries tremendous meaning! I loved it, amazing job. Keep it up .