Reviews for Distorted Halo
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I like some of the phrasing in here it's very clever especially the last section 'I'm down on my knees, but i'll learn to crawl.' Unfortunately my tick for mistakes was acting up but I was able to see past that because of the messages and beautiful words in this.

breakmyfall91 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
whoop whoop! good stuff girl!