Reviews for Safe Bet |
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![]() ![]() Please Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, I hope you'll continue this story soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh! I'm so excited about this story! I hope you write the next chapter soon! *crosses fingers* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aawwww :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Update really, really soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story so much!please post soon this is such a guilty pleasure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This I is entertaining I really like it. I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh oh I wonder what's gonna happen now... Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Find these sentences and correct them: -I tapping the button a few times, -"Than, I just have a question for you. I really liked this chapter. It was enjoyable and had moments of tension :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Humorous chapter, I liked it. I like all your chapters, it's just I choose to bring forth all your flaws before I tell you the good. There is always room for improvements. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your protagonist seems a bit too formal. The way you've written her Pov, that is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its quite impressive. |
![]() ![]() I'm excited to read more. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Awesome chapter! The cab driver's words about her reconsidering was hilarious. :) Can't wait to see how their date goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a contradiction! I'm not a hussie, but yet I decide I need to have fun and go out with David anyway. Not that night but tomorrow night. Hahaha, sorry, it just made me giggle. Well at least we know how up front he is about what he wants. No shame in that. Although, if he did tht to the other girl in the elevator, with the whole dismissing thing, how does she know he won't just do that to her. Well I hope she doesn't get into too much deep pooh. Wouldn't want a broken heart so soon. Well, please update soon. Very nice story :) Thank you for the read. |