Reviews for Carnal Innocence
zagato chapter 1 . 3/21/2019
This is sweet, thanks for writing!
J.V.S chapter 3 . 3/25/2016
Loved it !
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
I read this a few days ago and then I came back to read if today. Sweet yet sexy. The feels simply overflow (not that I mind it :D)
I wonder what the expansion of this will be?
If you read this review, please consider this idea? That'll be great.

And oh, your writing is amazing. But that's obvious. Ain' it?

heal me forever chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
i always believed in ARRANGE marriages :P i DO seriously LOVE marriages DONT last EVER so yeah ..i am indian so its obv i believe in arranged dan love not nly dat i HAVE seen dat LOVE marriages dnt last ...! NO OFFENSE THOUGH !

totally loved dis stry very beautifully written :)
Uncensored chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Sweet and sizzling hot!
writersdream72 chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
I can't wait for you to update this. I'd like to see where you plan for this story to go.
sunkissed-skin chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
They don't have names...yet. I assume you were trying to give off an air of anonimity about them, it didn't really matter. There's just something about stories with unnamed characters that adds magic the literary regiment.

This is my first time reading detailed sex scenes from you and I must say I was captivated so far. I like their emotional and physical intimacy of lovemaking, it helps heighten the erotic edge. My favorite line in this story is definitely from the hero himself when he restate his marriage vow:

["I take you again. Our love will be stronger than ever and I vow to hold you in my arms every opportunity I get because there is no one, or no where else I would rather be the rest of my life than with you again..."]
sunkissed-skin chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Woah.. I love the emotions and the intense sexual chemistry between the characters. This is definitely sigh-worthy.
zooey will chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
I don't know why, for some reason fictionpress logged me out.

Sexyness rating: Tender but H.O.T. The love scene was tame on chapter 2 and then it gets hotter in this chapter. I like the ending where both of them renew (though not officially) their marriage vows. It was sweet. I'm interested in this story and look forward for the prequel :)
The Phoenix Girl chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
awwwwwww the whole chapter was amazing but my favorite part is the ending! it was sweet and it left me in tears! those two are lucky to have each other and they make the best couple ever :)
great work :)
innoc3nc3cuti3 chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
Your three-shots are sensational. Looking forward to reading the expansion version.
ForeverinDelirium chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
Gosh, this is such a delicious piece! You wrote tender yet sexy love scene. Great job. Looking forward for the expanded version of this story.
skye real chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
I love the story line. I'm just wondering if this is it or will you be retelling the story on how they married etc.
The Phoenix Girl chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! thank you for sharing it _
The Phoenix Girl chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Gosh this is SO good!
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