|Reviews for If You Look|
| NebulaGirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
I like it!
Already read it? Pshhhh... Who cares?
It's still good.
Although, I feel like sometimes you could be a little more creative with your line breaks, you just keep the phrase the way it is. If you're talking about a broken girl, it would look cool to have the lines broken as well.