Reviews for If You Look
NebulaGirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
I like it!

Already read it? Pshhhh... Who cares?

It's still good.

Although, I feel like sometimes you could be a little more creative with your line breaks, you just keep the phrase the way it is. If you're talking about a broken girl, it would look cool to have the lines broken as well.

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NebulaGirl