|Reviews for Remnants of St Greaves Academy|
| freddyburn chapter 12 . 7/1/2012
Like it. Cold, calculating and adds further to the plot. Just one little thing: "Recommended termination of approximately 6%." Should that be "Recommending termination?"
| Luke Kindred chapter 12 . 6/30/2012
| freddyburn chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
Love how things are coming together... hope you update soon
| Luke Kindred chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
Update soon _
| freddyburn chapter 10 . 6/11/2012
Ha Ha... loving it. Can't complain about the lenght- everything is good. You really have me hooked
| Luke Kindred chapter 10 . 6/10/2012
I feel really bad for him. To be lied to by everyone and end up being told he's going to die no matter how smart he is. Can't wait for more!
| Luke Kindred chapter 9 . 5/21/2012
Aw! Thanks for the shutout! And it was a really cool chapter! I can't wait to read more about Bruce and travel further into this story! Great job! And no it's not going that fast
| freddyburn chapter 9 . 5/21/2012
To answere your question- Yes, the story is moving a bit too fast. Now I have a question or two:
1) Is the main character loosing it?
2) What is his name?
3) What the freaking hell is going on?
Adding this story to alerts and fav's.
| freddyburn chapter 8 . 5/21/2012
Your chapters capture my attention, but, alas, I think you know what I am about to say, thus, I won't say it.
| freddyburn chapter 7 . 5/21/2012
Interesting, but, again, short. You have some great ideas, but you are not doing them justice with the lenght of your chapters
| freddyburn chapter 6 . 5/21/2012
Given my last review, this may seem a bit hypocritical, but capital letters are important- Titanic for example. In this instance, you are using the word in refernce to the ship, thus it gets a capital letter. If you are describing something as titanic (as in, it is big), you give it a small letter. And more detail is needed- this chapter was way too short.
| freddyburn chapter 5 . 5/21/2012
hmmm... maybe a bit more discription of the office and mr grayhunt
| freddyburn chapter 4 . 5/21/2012
nice discriptions of Jeff
| freddyburn chapter 3 . 5/21/2012
I am liking this story more and more
| freddyburn chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
another short chapter, but still interesting