Reviews for Elemental Powers
JaredDean chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Too short! But you probably had a length restriction if it was for school. I could see your expanding this into a couple of chapters and I think it is a good story idea. Good job.
ObessedWtihWRITING chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
I don't know what else to say but...it was great. I don't see can grammar mistakes, though I'm not the best at it either. .