Reviews for Night's Verses
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I like these! You combine night and spirituality very effectively, and I like how you decided to use haikus. They work very nicely.

The first is my favorite. Getting burned by the sun for worshipping the moon sounds like the classic Old Testament treatment.

Good work!
Thomicas chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
A wonderful and spiritual journey through the nighttime. Once again I am impressed by how you say so much and have such an emotional impact on me with so few words and verses. Every single one of these haikus make me reflect and ponder on my own life and existence. Great job.

- Thomas
C Clawson chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
WOW that was fantastic! you do a very good job of setting up a single image and using several haikus to make your picture clear and poetic. well done! I enjoyed these very much. :)