Reviews for Borderline
LittleLights chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Let me start off by saying that your imagery is remarkable. The metaphors you use, though not always clear, are thought-provoking and beautiful, making me sink into the poem completely. I don't know exactly what's going on, and the third stanza totally lost me, but it was beautiful all the same. I started to realize what was happening again in the last stanza, so it's all good. Your "e.e. cummings" style of writing really suits the words, and I think it was an excellent choice to use it. I hope you keep posting, because you're an amazing writer. When I actually log into my account, I'll be sure to favorite you. :) Well done.