Reviews for Her Letters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A very good story! You should write more chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute! I hope you continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting beginning to your story - nice characterization of Nick! I wish guys were that perceptive and awesome...but sadly, they're not. Anyway, there some grammar issues which I think you can definitely fix no problem. There was one thing that kind of bothered me, though. When you were describing Alex before we knew his name was Alex, you kept saying 'that guy' which is kind of redundant and not very elegant sounding. Maybe vary your word choice a little? Food for thought...(this isn't a flame, btw. Just constructive criticism!) Oh and this: Hope that one day…you'll notice me. Just as I notice you. is the cutest line EVARRRR. Seriously. Haha, keep up the great work and UPDATE soon. |