Reviews for On the Way to Grandmother's House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! No, her mother just wants to ruin EVERYTHING! As much as I like Margery, I don't really want her in on the secret. I do have a feeling that Margery will secretly follow Thea to the clearing and catch her with Addin and tell their witch of a mother. Not good! I hope you have another chapter up soon! I'm dying! Also, cute addition about how the fabric matches Addin's eyes. Aww. She is so in love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW, THIS IS THE BEST. Kinda confused, though. Was that a dream? I think it was since Addin isn't out of the cage. Addin and Althea, please. I feel that Nicholas will be the one hunting her down and turning her in for being with Addin or something. I just feel like he's in the way. Ironic, isn't it, that it's supposed to be Addin in the way of Althea's relationship with Nicholas. But nope, so yep. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beautiful. You have so much talent |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate that I don't hate Nicolas. I'm ready to find out what's going to happen to Adden... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this was so incredibly sweet. I teared up. Epic! PLEASE update soon! Now I'm off to read this chapter again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's smitten by Addin! I feel so sorry for him. I was a tad confused about the water barrel. Was Althea saying she once saw them poke fun near a barrel and he fell in? ... Still good chapter! I was so happy you updated! Poor Addin. Maybe his brother will help free him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story very very much, so you should update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that a dream? o_o The story just became ten million times better - and it was wonderful to start with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've actually thought this story was eerily similar to Little Red Riding Hood... I'm glad it was acknowledged in the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to Adden and Althea's time together the most _ It's so beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously, I just love this. Each chapter is short but powerful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Althea's relationship with her father. It will be rather heartbreaking if he turns out to be a "bad guy" in this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, he proposed :3 Still...Adden... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...maybe Nicolas isn't SO bad, but Adden is better |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel such sympathy for Althea. This really is a brilliant story you know |