|Reviews for Sharps and Flats|
| FictionFree chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Amazing. Simply amazing.
| Claire Gerdes chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Aw, you have no reviews! Well, I owe you a review anyway, so here I am. Shall we begin?
I. It was a bit confusing, was the older man a ghost and the other person his son? Grandson? This very might just be my own lack of understanding or it may be the way it's written, I'm not sure.
II. What time period was this set it? I only ask because the dialougue (I spelled that wrong) the charactors are using. It's seems a little out dated for modern times.
III. All in all, it was a good little short. It was eloquent (Again with the misspellings!) it was well put together and obviously thought out and it was original!
Good job and keep writing,