YAY, you updated! I'm very happy. It was a good chapter, not too long and not to short.

Brilliant! I can't wait to read more, so please update soon! :)

I love the reference to Tangled (by chance I watched it yesterday)although I've now seen it a couple of times it still manages to make me laugh. I trust that you like it too?

I'm really glad to see you've started (what I'm guessing will be) another wonderful story.

Take care and enjoy!

Lara

really like to story. hope you update sooon :)

I'd suggest putting line-breaks or dividers in when the POV changes, but other than that I found no fault. D I love it.

Yeah, a new story! I am really looking forward to this; it seems different from what you have written in the past. Thanks for the new post!

I'm definitely liking this already and I can't wait for the next chapters. This is sure to be an interesting story.

A great first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more soon.

I was just sifting through FP when - low and behold! - I came across this little piece of magic. It was a very good introductory chapter, and the only error I could find was in the first few paragraphs '...where everyone was unbelievable wealthy and tan.' Although it should say, '..where everyone was unbelievablY wealthy and tan.' Correct? Danvers has a daughter? It really surprised me, to say the least. I was expecting another high school drama, but no kid in high school (or so I'm hoping) has a four/five year old daughter, right? I like the originality. Really interesting, perfect, really. Not too descriptive, not too slow. You had the right amount of events and handled the dialogue really well. Can't wait for the next chapter! xx P.W

Aaahhhhhhh! Yay! A new story. I've been following your stories for years, I think since finding one on Meg Cabot Message Boards, and this may be one of my first comments on a story. Hah! LOVING the first chapter of this one.

Simply put, I cannot wait for more!

Happy writings to you dear.

-dreamzzdreamer

I hope this is the first review. I have never had one before. :) :)

I am already hooked! This seems like a typical cliche but I really like your style of writing. Plus Sarah watched Tangled 20 times! That is definitely going to make me come back for more. After all it isn't every day you hear of someone ( no matter how fictional) watch that movie only 3 times less than you! :) :)