Reviews for Daydream
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
This was good. I enjoy how you described her daydreaming as being lost in another world, that is what its mostly about. Disappearing and letting your inner thoughts and dreams take you away. I also liked what' True Talker' said about your poem; made me think more about that other character making an attempt to get into that other world. Very well done, I enjoyed it very much. :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
True Talker chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
It is actually beautiful yet sad why because maybe the one who is reaching she wants him to find her. You write this quite well and it had made me think.