Reviews for These Haunted Halls
KrissieAnaMaureen chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
cool poem. The lines 'Make us feel like dolls, always on display, always trying to breakaway' remind me of how I feel at school sometimes.
ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I love the sense of rhythm in this poem, especially the repetition and alliteration of "haunted halls." Nicely done :)
Himawari No Hana chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Holy mess dude... Stop being so gosh dang awesome at this stuff! It's so creepy but yet so awesome!
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
omg I love it!:D