Reviews for So Much to Make Up For |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was sooo cute! I loved it :) Keep on writing! xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() "So much to make up for." A nice way to end a short story, a nice solid ending as such. "Bitches, I'm inquiring like a mo fo" It seems totally unnecessary, and like an attack at who knows who. It doesn't seem to go with Lola's personality. But that is just one line. The rest of the story is nice. I like how both dialogue and description develops the story. |