Reviews for Bruises and Scars
All Along chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
This one is just haunting. It doesn't matter how the narrator became bruised and scarred - scar tissue tells its own truths, and reminds us of where we have been, but not, let's hope, of who we now are. Again, just beautiful. Stunningly so.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I like this poem, honestly I do, but I didn't feel it was one of your strongest, but it was done really well, don't get me wrong. Amazing job, but try going a little deeper if you can in this type of poetry writing. (pleaseeeee don't take this criticism the wrong way. I mean it in the nicest way possible, honestly I do.) Amamzing job, keep it up .
Sami Dial chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
i like this one :)
katrrat chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I usually don't quite enjoy 'tragedy poems' since I try to be all about positivity, but this one includes a certain beauty for me. I especially love the ending. Your words are stunning!

Go on, keep it up! :D
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Vary deep, it reminds me of this character I made. Lovely as always. :)