Reviews for Incognito
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I like this. The beginning is a great description. It's vague enough that people can kind of make their own which is nice. I also liked the second stanza. It was kinda sweet, but so relateable. We all have people we'd only thank if they were asleep. I also like how you ask it as a question. It's very sweet. The only thing is the connection between the two stanzas was kinda not there for me unless you and this person is the we? The we in the first stanza seemed more universal though...

Anyway, nice job.

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