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earthday chapter 21 . 4/19
Oooh I just loved that chapter name! It said so much about the chapter! What a sticky situation Jamie has found himself in - your plot twists and turns are just great! One of my favourite bits was when he turned over in bed and saw all the posters of the cities, like his future - I thought that was a fab part and really inventive! I'll be interested to see how Jack comes into this later as well!
sweetladyjane2012 chapter 21 . 4/16
Sheila does have kind of a big mouth doesn't she...
earthday chapter 20 . 3/10
Oooh, intriguing! I wonder what is in store for Jack and Jamie! I love the plot development with him going to stay with Jack and Ellen - could be very interesting. Another great chapter :)
NaoEarthGoddess chapter 19 . 2/14
Ooh, I really like this story. Please continue I'd love to read more! ;)

-NaoEG
earthday chapter 19 . 2/5
Great chapter! I love the tension brewing up in the relationship between Jamie and Walter. I'd love to see Walter's reaction to him leaving. And I'll be interested to see how Jack and Ellen treat him when he meets them again. Jamie's such a great character!
sweetladyjane2012 chapter 19 . 2/4
Wow, sounds like a really exhausting trip...
sweetladyjane2012 chapter 17 . 12/30/2013
I thought that was kind of sexy, how they started out fighting and then made love...sometimes getting into a fight does fuel passion for some people. I think, however, that the age gap between Walter and Jamie may be going to cause problems down the road...
earthday chapter 17 . 12/23/2013
Great new chapter! I love how, in each one, Jamie engages with the reader, through the way you use first person in the writing. That's great to read. Also, the tension between him and Walter was tangible, even in a short amount of words. Excited to see how Jamie deals with their situation, and Walter's reaction to it!
sweetladyjane2012 chapter 16 . 11/21/2013
Aww poor Jamie, and after he ate a breath mint and everything...
earthday chapter 16 . 11/21/2013
Great update! One of my favourite things about this chapter was the description of Jamie's feelings as he went to meet Walter - anticipating and unsure, although with a hint of excitement! You balanced that very well. And the comparison of Walter to an old western cowboy was great! But the most interesting part of all, I thought, was the last line seeming to hint at another developing element in Jamie and Walter's relationship! I will love to see what that means for them :)
sweetladyjane2012 chapter 15 . 11/4/2013
Wow, it sounds like you've sure done a lot of research about Hawaii and the missionaries! I am confused about why Sheila wanted Jamie to meet Jack however...
earthday chapter 15 . 11/2/2013
Oh, I love the tone of this story! It's very light and fun in a way and reading it from Jamie's POV in first person is great! I hope Jack turns up again - he seems like an interesting character! And I loved the idea of the history party!
earthday chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
I'm so happy you're carrying on with this story! It's so fun and bubbly! It's interesting to read a story in first person as well! This chapter was great - I'd like to see where the deal with the pendant leads! Jamie seemed to like it! Just one thing I was going to ask about - in this chapter, was 'Simon' meant to be 'Sid' from the previous chapters or someone different? :)
firefox vixen chapter 13 . 9/17/2013
I really like this story!:D
rylaraves chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
It has all the makings of a steamy story, but alter really comes off as a jerk and I feel for poor Jamie's fish-out-of-the-water life. Plus the fact he just doesn't know where to put himself and just wanting to be loved.
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