Reviews for Behind Those Eyes
ElettraBelle chapter 2 . 5/23/2012
I can't describe how much I'm starting to love this story! Excellent.
The Red Eyed Lynx chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
i cant wait to read what happens next
StarlessRaven chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
Great job! This chapter was really good. I'm dap glad you took my suggestions, and I can't wait to edit the next bit!
ElettraBelle chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I like how you discribed the things. The conversation between Kaia and Krystalleta was really exciting and pulling into reading more. I think you should start with Money turning 16.
Raymond Lamar Gilstrap chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Short but rich with dialogue. Pretty funny description about wearing flip flops. LOL! I want to read more of this. I think you should have the next chapter with Money turning 16.
ChildCalledSilence chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I am intrigued. Good sign. I think you should start it when Maney has turned sixteen but integrate flashbacks of her being raised by Kaia as the story progresses.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I liked the dialogue because it was believable and it fit the characters well. I liked the character Kaia because her character was unique and I've never read anything like this on FP.