|Reviews for provocative lines|
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
if you were great before you are a goddess now.
this whole thing is so...evocative? poetic? (i hate using that word to describe poetry) so many perfect lines. ahhhh
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
haunting. beautiful. the last line leaves an imprint on my mind. there's so much regret in this, and so many poetic lines — "the sun would've set upon him and i at / different times" and "i would never have known his truths, nor hers / i would never have been a body in the morgue" are. flawless. you've improved loads, gosh.