Reviews for his hands like ghosts
electrical moon chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Awesome poem! I love how you smashed 'dirtynastywrong' together like that and how his hands are ghosts over her bones. I also love 'that soft dip in her collarbone'.
So-she-wrote-a-poem-about-it chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
I kept rereading this. I love the idea of the boy searching her body for something and her contemplating the consequences of what he'll find or at least knowing what it may mean since she knows herself. haha hard to put down. I guess what I'm saying is this poem really hit a note with me. Happy writing
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
there's some really powerful narration in here. I especially liked the last stanza.
Robert Orville Berkshire chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Some sensual descriptions here. I like it.