Reviews for Adventures With Cereal
Percabethgirl2645 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Then something clicked in my ultra intelligent brain. My dinner wasn't ruined! Quickly fell to my knees not in despair but in brilliance. I scooped up some of the cereal off of the floor and placed it in the bowl aka the alter for the deliciousness that rightfully belongs to my stomach.

Brilliant. Really. You're a mastermind. Hilarious. Good job :D
Electrified Pool chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Holy crap. Floor cereal? Priceless, I tell you, albeit a little disgusting. Although it makes sense, especially of a cereal of that caliber. I don't think I could eat floor cereal, though.

Anyways, awesome story! Write more good stuff!
Ram Attra chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!

man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.

and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiv my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!