Reviews for There is no Love in Her Heart
gdhtbhd chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Wow. This is... emotionful. This is great. This is epic.

I can almost see the scene in my mind.

You're a great writer. Keep it up!

(And thanks for reviewing my story! :) )
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
You have a little trouble with apostrophes, but that's it.
Victor Spriggs chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Good story. I feel the frustration of Lass, I'd want Jack to leave me alone too.