Reviews for There is no Love in Her Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is... emotionful. This is great. This is epic. I can almost see the scene in my mind. You're a great writer. Keep it up! (And thanks for reviewing my story! :) ) |
![]() ![]() You have a little trouble with apostrophes, but that's it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. I feel the frustration of Lass, I'd want Jack to leave me alone too. |