|Reviews for slow down|
| Archia chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Short but it still holds it effects. Sometimes it's the short fast impact that works, and this is one of those. It says everything that it needs to say, nice.
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
It's short, but the brevity really carries the emotion. Good poem!
| Blood and Butterflies chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Feels like I'm dreaming.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Your poetry really makes me think.