Reviews for Chased
T.S. Liz chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I loved the vividness of the story!

Keep it up!
InfatuatedCritic chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Great story! It has a sense of urgency and desperation that made my heart pound. The short, clipped phrases toward the end nailed the suspense.

I only found two superficial errors:

[I almost fell flat ton my face,]

Remove the 't' in 'ton'

[It's reflection.]

The apostrophe in 'It's' makes the sentence read as "It is reflection". Take it out and the sentence should read better.