|Reviews for Chased|
| T.S. Liz chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I loved the vividness of the story!
Keep it up!
| InfatuatedCritic chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Great story! It has a sense of urgency and desperation that made my heart pound. The short, clipped phrases toward the end nailed the suspense.
I only found two superficial errors:
[I almost fell flat ton my face,]
Remove the 't' in 'ton'
The apostrophe in 'It's' makes the sentence read as "It is reflection". Take it out and the sentence should read better.