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steffxnie chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I like how you've described the transformation over time, from being close to someone and then you hardly know each other anymore. There are so many thoughts and feelings in between beside pain and numbness. I like the third last paragraph best. So many conflicting emotions and not wanting to let go even when you know you should.

'I can't blame you for it, though. You've always had no idea, the effect that you have toward people like me.

Especially me.'

This exactly. I like how it ends slightly heavier.

Keep writing. :)