Reviews for a wet towel left to dry on the bathroom floor
My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
I love the ominous feel at the end - "poisoning" is such a strong word!
Gelatin is dead whale bones chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
There are some really beautiful thoughts in this. I liked how the emotions became more raw towards the end as does the writing. The imagery in the last two stanzas really made this poem. Happy writing~~
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
This is breathtaking, and you create something so real, and it's just magic.


. darkershadeofpale
ChintzyHoyden chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
The last stanza is so beautiful, as is the poem's entirety. Your writing is amazing, thanks for sharing.

recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
third stanza was definitely my favourite. I also liked the last few lines.