Reviews for Chronomentrophobia
Etinry-v chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
This is a very detailed poem. The words you use are just right and make you have the emotions you intended the reader to have. Keep typing...
friendlystranger chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
really cool idea, super original

i think your word choice could have been better. the words don't do the idea justice. honestly if you just changed one or two it'd be exponentially more enjoyable. like maybe "awful" in the second stanza or "frightening" in the third...

the last line is great- "cold, mechanical face" was a good description.
Blood and Butterflies chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
...scary...