Reviews for Porcelain Fists
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
oh, this was just so so pretty,

i don't know what to say besides keep up the amazing flawless beautiful work darling! :)
bloodyamore chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
gwah! amazing!

i can -feel- this poem. like porcelain fists crashing into my ribs. it so beautifully characterizes a real person, with imagery that makes strikes me as real and more than just a description, but also a feeling. if that makes any sense.

although i was not sure of everything going on in the poem, i know the words are absolutely wonderful. real all while sounding like an urban fairytale to me - what reality feels like when we're living it.

sorry that this was so long .