I'm intrigued and excited to read more. Also very happy that this is a completed story and I won't be left hanging haha

You should do a rewrite of this story. (but leave this up)

Completely in love with your work
You have a talent for portraying characters in multiple lights that I know most people have trouble with. The only thing I've had trouble with is that you sometimes use names interchangeably Elizabeth and Emma; Mary and Sara. It pulls be out of the story for a moment, but I've been binge reading this and don't plan on stopping. :)))

I wasn't planning to read any stories this late at night (it was around midnight when I started this) but then I fell in love with Nottage and ended up reading this all in one go. It was definitely a fun read and I was surprised to find how close Edward and Elizabeth became, although I'm not entirely surprised given the nature of sex. Anyway, excellent story, very addicting!

Brilliant story, you're very talented. Can't wait to read the sequel. Happy writing!

I loved this story, cant wait to read the sequel

I really like your story. It's realistic and not overall cheesy. But you may wanna go over it again and check the names. You've used Emma for Elizabeth and Sara for Mary a couple times. But besides that: Great work!

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!

I'm sure this has been said at some point but elizabeth keeps being switched with emma and mary's name keeos getting switched with sara.

This was a charming read! Thank you for writing and sharing it.

-J

This story is amazing! Your an awesome write! I can't wait to read the sequel. Though I really can't choose between Edward and William!:-0 both are great in different ways and the have definitely grown in me(:

This story moved me to tears! I absolutely adore it- you have me torn between Edward and William! I can't wait to start your sequel- which I am going to do so right now!

nooo! hate it hate it hate it :( i wanted edward to marry her sooo badly. i know that's not really possible considering the time but you're a good writer, im sure you could've worked something out ;) thanks for the good read anyway it was amazing!

Fantastic!

I like Attenborough more than I do Nottage. I am hoping for the Lord Colonel to have a relatinship with Elizabeth not as a rag doll, but as a women whom he would marry.