Reviews for shimmer
a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
beautiful, :)
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I really liked the imagery and the way that it ended, nice work.
electrical moon chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Great poem! I love the imagery, particularly 'cellophane wrapped eyes' and 'she predicts a graceful explosion of bittersweet spots'. A little technical advice: if you hit shift enter when you're writing it you make the poem single-spaced.