Reviews for Camp Desideri Azzurri |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really hated to see this story end-I loved it immensely and your characters became a part of me, my life-it brings tears to my eyes Fes! GREAT STORY AND GREAT WRITING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY LORD-I WAS NOT READY to REACH THE END OF THE CHAPTERS ALREADY POSTED. My heart is breaking for Devin! He and Saphia belong together and I am HOLDING MY BREATH until another chapter comes out so I can know if they eventually get together! You have done an AMAZINGLY EXCELLENT JOB in both telling this story and in writing it-IT IS PURE PERFECTION! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS FES-GREAT STORY AND EXCELLENT WRITING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story ! I'm suprised not many have read this amazing story ! Great job ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! There's another girl in Devin's life? Or is he talking about his mom in the end? |
![]() ![]() AWWWWWW! I like how he doesn't shower with sweet stuff in the end, but calls her a foolish girl and stuff like that instead. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. I almost cried! :-) great chappie |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! Why didn't i come across this story before? I thought i put you in my author alert list, but i guess i forgot.. The story is beautiful! I thought it was moving too fast in the beginning but it makes sense. And.. awww... he's telling her! FInally! It would be helpful if she was a little smarter like Tyson and not deny the fact that Kei and Devin are the same. But.. are all your main male characters adorably lazy, rich, and have awesome black hair? It's too tempting ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Devin has a lot if explaining to do. Awsome chappie :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. He told her he loved her:-) !yes ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() STILL BEING GOOD ...ANY LUCK ON THE PUBLISHING THING YET ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow awsome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOD AS ALWAYS , ONLY PART I FOUND ALITTLE HARD TO BELIEVE WAS SHE FELL ASLEEP DURING A TIME (MOST GIRLS) AFTER NOT SEEING SOMEONE FOR A LENGTH OF TIME WOULDN'T WANT TO PLAY 1000 QUESTION THING LOL... OR EITHER THAT HAVE SOME MEANTION EARLIER IN THE STORY OF HER STARTING TO GET TIRED WHICH MIGHT HAVE EXPLAINED HER FALLING ASLEEP SO QUICKLY . JUST A THOUGHT. NOTHING CRITICAL THOUGH. HOPE CHAPPY 4 COMING SOON. FLIPPER66 PHIL ROBBINS I HOPE YOU'VE CONSIDERED LOOKING AT SOME OF MINE AND REVIEWING |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol... what a cliff hanger more ...more ...more lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story cant wait for the next chapter! |