|Reviews for Dragon's Oath|
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Very very nice. I have not read the novel, but this is a beautiful piece. Amazing job, keep it up :D
| Wonder46 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I have no idea what the HAM this is about because I haven't read the books but it's REALLY GOOD!
| Tanis Phillipus chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
This is a really nice poem. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but with poetry it doesn't really matter that much, I guess.
Goddesses' (plural) Goddess' (singular)
who knock at your door.
mercy and kindness, or Mercy and Kindness
shalt - shall works better I think
whom never fell should be who, since 'you' is the subject.
Stuff like that... Nothing major.
I really really like the last line.