|Reviews for The End of the Line|
| Huff.Puff.Scoff.Bluff chapter 6 . 5/19/2012
Oh my God! She really is pregnant! This is wonderful! I can't wait till she tells Henry!
| Rosemarysgraden001 chapter 6 . 5/18/2012
Yay a baby! This was a really interesting chapters because of the different almost starts off a little somber/upset. Then it becomes happy and exciting. I really like the pace of the story. I'm glad that Rebecca is happy about having a baby. I'm sure that Henry will be thrilled as well. That part with Uncle Cunningham was very amusing..it be really awkward to reveal that news to a niece o.O
A.D.W. loves J.L.S. Forever
| Huff.Puff.Scoff.Bluff chapter 5 . 5/11/2012
That was great. :)
| Rosemarysgraden001 chapter 5 . 5/9/2012
You're leaving me hanging...
Anyway I sort of like the idea of going to war in lace and pink. I would totally do that myself. I really liked the pace of the story. I thought that the reaction with Henry was wonderfully written. Overall it was a pretty epic chapter and I can't wait for more.
A.D.W loves J.L.S forever
| Huff.Puff.Scoff.Bluff chapter 4 . 5/4/2012
YESSS! THE SEQUEL! I didn't know you had one! I was just scrolling down and all and clicked your Author Name and I saw the sequel! You should've seen ow happy I am! This is absolutely amazing. I so knew that Henry and Rebecca would end up together.
And...one more thing. Is Rebecca pregnant?
| Rosemarysgraden001 chapter 4 . 5/4/2012
I had no clue that you had a sequel. I was so excited to find that out. Anyway on to actual reviewing your story...
Are you sure Rebecca isn't pregnant?... I'm not a doctor, but she has a few of the symptoms.I like the name Rebecca Ann it's a pretty name. I think that it was really easy to follow your story. The details make you feel like you are in a different world. I thought that Rebbeca's personality reminded me of myself. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Kenti chapter 4 . 5/3/2012
Uh oh! Something's up! Pregnant? ;)
| OIFvet84 chapter 4 . 5/2/2012
Wow rapid fire chatpers. I love it! haha Well we all know something is going to happen in reguards to the blackmailer and even though I am extrememly curious about that I'm actually looking forward to knowing whether or not Rebecca is actually pregnant or not. I mean maybe if a heir does get pregnant and has a child then the mysterious appearances of the heirs from the future will stop? Yet another possible meaning for the title. Great chapters and keep'em comin, I love seeing multiple unread chapter when I occasionally log in.
| OIFvet84 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I'm so glad you're writing a sequal. Can't wait to read about the adventures and pitfalls awaiting the lovely couple and company. Kinda leary about the title though. 'The End of the Line' can mean so many things.
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I liked this story, please keep writing.