Reviews for Something Not Right About Them
the clockwork doll chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
This is really good - the grammar isn't perfect, but that's something that you can improve if you want to.

It's very gripping - and has a nice plot build up.

Well done!
thetabbykitteh chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I liked this so please continue.

Kitty