Reviews for The Wild Ones |
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![]() ![]() ![]() U have a amazing ending always. I love this story. But just for once could u plz let Emily say her past to Kyle? I mean, then they'll both know wht to do. I mean, plz just do it. In a lonely park or a mountain top or somewhere lonely. Readers would like it. GooD-LucK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my cheeze. update please:3 |
![]() ![]() woooooow i so enjoyed it. u r a good writer. while reading i was imagining it as if i was watching movie. i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww. Kyle's jealous! this is really going great! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() who the heck is the other guy? aw, poor Kyle :)) - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahaha! she knocked him out! really funny :) great fight scene! - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! i wonder how Kyle will save her :) - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no! wonder who the mysterious people are ... and aw, they kissed :*) - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, i kind of expected the ending :) - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha, love the ending! Emily! she's so amazing :) - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa. who is she? what service is she into? Emily is awesome! and what's the flaming dragon? :) P.S. you kind of had some typos like in: 'It had been a while since she wrote a car as comfortable as this.' [i think you meant rode not wrote] 'y'know where school girl outfits' [wear not where] :) sorry, i couldn't help pointing those out... really great chapter though - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice :0 wonder what he has planned for her :) - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, i did enjoy it :) so much ... it's super cute ... i think Emily is really adorable with the control freak attitude, haha ... and i think Kyle's cool for liking a girl's voice :) the vice principal is so weird ... haha! great start so far! i'm gonna read the next chapters! - d. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two things: 1) I LOVE THE COVER. It's perfect, and awesome. So cute :) 2) This chapter was amazing as usual :D Poor Emily and Kyle. I really loved the way you wrote Emily's emotions, it was completely spot on and so was her reaction. Poor Kyle though, I wonder when he'll meet the girl his dad wants him to marry though. And I wonder what Emily will do if she finds out about that girl...hmmmm And oh noes! The gala money has been stolen? I wonder who did it though... |