Reviews for The Wild Ones
ARulzz chapter 19 . 7/3/2012
U have a amazing ending always. I love this story. But just for once could u plz let Emily say her past to Kyle? I mean, then they'll both know wht to do. I mean, plz just do it. In a lonely park or a mountain top or somewhere lonely. Readers would like it. GooD-LucK!
CurryBunChan chapter 19 . 7/2/2012
oh my cheeze. update please:3
Guest chapter 19 . 6/28/2012
woooooow i so enjoyed it. u r a good writer. while reading i was imagining it as if i was watching movie. i like it
dawnita chapter 10 . 6/27/2012
awww. Kyle's jealous! this is really going great!

dawnita chapter 9 . 6/27/2012
who the heck is the other guy? aw, poor Kyle :))

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dawnita chapter 8 . 6/27/2012

she knocked him out! really funny :) great fight scene!

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dawnita chapter 7 . 6/27/2012
great chapter! i wonder how Kyle will save her


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dawnita chapter 6 . 6/27/2012
oh no! wonder who the mysterious people are ... and aw, they kissed :*)

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dawnita chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
haha, i kind of expected the ending :)

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dawnita chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
hahaha, love the ending!

Emily! she's so amazing :)

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dawnita chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
whoa. who is she? what service is she into? Emily is awesome! and what's the flaming dragon?


P.S. you kind of had some typos like in:

'It had been a while since she wrote a car as comfortable as this.' [i think you meant rode not wrote]

'y'know where school girl outfits' [wear not where]


sorry, i couldn't help pointing those out... really great chapter though

- d.
dawnita chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
nice :0 wonder what he has planned for her :)

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dawnita chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
yes, i did enjoy it :) so much ... it's super cute ... i think Emily is really adorable with the control freak attitude, haha ... and i think Kyle's cool for liking a girl's voice :)

the vice principal is so weird ... haha!

great start so far! i'm gonna read the next chapters!

- d.
TheLunette chapter 19 . 6/26/2012
love this story
AMessofPickles chapter 19 . 6/26/2012
Two things:

1) I LOVE THE COVER. It's perfect, and awesome. So cute :)

2) This chapter was amazing as usual :D Poor Emily and Kyle. I really loved the way you wrote Emily's emotions, it was completely spot on and so was her reaction. Poor Kyle though, I wonder when he'll meet the girl his dad wants him to marry though. And I wonder what Emily will do if she finds out about that girl...hmmmm

And oh noes! The gala money has been stolen? I wonder who did it though...
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