|Reviews for Inhuman Paradise|
| Kristina chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
I am absolutely amazed!
Your narrating style is quite rare and if, people tend to not use it well, but your narration makes me imagine the people, and even the whole setting. Even though Gabriel is so "modern", and all the other angels as well aren't depicted as the typical saints really, you still managed to give them a serious and kind of epic touch.
also the way Lucifer and Skylar build an emotional connection rather slowly and by actually communicating to each other makes this story dofferent from the typical teenage-love story.
There are so many more things - really mostly the wee things - that make me love it a lot. Not just the plot, but the setting, characters, background and clear evidence that you thought about it thoroughly before you put it on paper make me feel like I'm reading a well rounded, thought out piece of art.
very inspirational, thanks so much for sharing it and please keep on updating!
| Miles-tails-prowler chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
Great story. Very original!
| DomoKun Rainbokinz chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
hhmmm, your story seems pretty interesting so far. i'm wondering how the relationship between skylar and lucifer will unfold...and i'm also wondering about this apocalypse that's coming. what will happen? oh, and also, try and look over you chapter first before posting. i found a few spelling mistakes. not really a big deal, but just a little piece of advice from me :) also, i'd really appreciate it if you take a few moments to check out my story and leave a review :D anyways, great job so far!
| peaches-baby chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
Really good. A little confusing as to what was going on at some points. For ex: the POV's were all muddled and clumped together. Perhaps putting a line between or hit enter twice? Anyway, i like where this is going and I can't wait to see what Lucifer will do and how his brothers will react!
| DomoKun Rainbokinz chapter 4 . 6/6/2012
hey! wow, it must suck to have a broken leg, hope it heals soon! it's been a pretty interesting story so far, i'm excited to see what happens between skylar and lucifer. will skylar finally talk? and what will happen to lucifer? can't wait for your next chapter, get better soon! :)
oh, and also, how come there weren't question marks? just a little something i noticed.
| Nephythys chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
I really, really like it. Maybe a bit too dark and tragic for my taste, but it's written in a very smooth, neat way. Not very complicated, and with a strong, good vocabulary. Keep up the good work A!
| freshink2 chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
This is very nice start and you have seriously pulled me into your story. I've read stories about demons and angels, but not one exclusively about Lucifer himself and I am in love with this version. I'll be reading to see where you take this, all the different paths this goes on, good luck!
| peaches-baby chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
this is getting really good! I can't wait for the next installment. I love the fact that you made Lucifer more of a tragedy then a fiend. I have never seen this angle taken before. And by the way, i love the fact that you used the word mellifluous! Nicely done!
| xasylumx chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
wow i like it and look forward to reading more please read and review my story A Jaden Legacy; The Arena Of Approval, its not as good as this but will get better
| peaches-baby chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
so i'm pretty sure that this chapter just got me very intrigued.
| peaches-baby chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
hey this is a good start. I think making Lucifer seem more relatable is a good idea than having him be so standoffish and separate from the rest of the world. Nice start!