|Reviews for Armageddon|
| Bejamin Medric chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I feel sorry for Lin. I can imagine why he probably became the knight, and why he failed. Because he's a simple man, not a hero, and he can't fake it forever.
| scribhneoir literatka chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Oh goodness...that was fantastic! You are a master of description, metaphor, simile, and personification. You described it so detailed, but without overloading the audience. And the mystery, oh my am I hooked! Haha
One thing, just one little thing, bothered me.
[They let me go, you know, as the white fire sprang to life, engulfing them in light]
I don't know, it doesn't sound like something a person would say. Maybe it's just me though...anyways, great job and I am soooo looking forward to what's coming next!