|Reviews for Restrictions|
| The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
What in the world does this have to do with lemonade?
"Freedom and comfortable shoes come out./ Vibrant rainbows filling up the once grey space…" A comma would work better than a fullstop there. They read as part of the same sentence.
"it is all fun and games and so very good until the end of the day," - I think you should break that line somewhere; it's a little long.
I still wear my school shoes. They keep my feet warm when walking through the tall grass. And the shirts. And the socks, and the scarf. It's just the skirts I've ditched now, funnily enough. They get caught in escalators.